Do you have any feedback for Hadlee about his writing?
This morning, I looked out the window. It was snowing and raining. I was dumbstruck!
The rain was drip-dropping, the snow was like little white flakes and the hail was like rice bubbles popping!
Yes, you never know what is behind a closed curtain! Marcella (Mum Jilles)
ReplyDeleteGreat story Hadlee can you add a tiny bit more Shamus
ReplyDeleteawesome Hadlle because of yousing dumbstruck. by Ryan
ReplyDeleteWOW Hadlee! thats the best story I'v heard so far Hadlee.
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Wow Hadlee! I like how you used your wow word's. from Zac.
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