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From Mrs Marshall & Room 14

Thursday 20 September 2012

This Morning (by Hadlee, age 7)

Do you have any feedback for Hadlee about his writing?

This morning, I looked out the window. It was snowing and raining. I was dumbstruck!

 The rain was drip-dropping, the snow was like little white flakes and the hail was like rice bubbles popping!
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 September 2012 at 02:49

    Yes, you never know what is behind a closed curtain! Marcella (Mum Jilles)

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  2. Anonymous22 October 2012 at 18:18

    Great story Hadlee can you add a tiny bit more Shamus

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  3. Anonymous22 October 2012 at 19:02

    awesome Hadlle because of yousing dumbstruck. by Ryan

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  4. Anonymous28 October 2012 at 23:08

    WOW Hadlee! thats the best story I'v heard so far Hadlee.

    from Peta

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  5. Anonymous1 November 2012 at 13:53

    Wow Hadlee! I like how you used your wow word's. from Zac.

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