I Love.... (by Grace, age 7)

Do you have any feedback for Grace on her first draft?

I love when my dog comes and sleeps with me,
But I don't like when I get scratches.

I love when I get treats,

But I don't like those square lollies.

I love when I get KFC,

But I don't like when Dad cooks tea.

I love when all my family are at our house

But I don't like when they all go away.

I love when I hear purring from my cat, Tosh.

But I don't like that he's madly insane!