Do you have any feedback for Erica on her finished piece?
My hand trembles on the smooth, cold door handle. The brown wooden door in front of me seems to block my way.
Colourful bags on brown hooks are beside
me and all around me. Like children giving warm, friendly looks…..until I see
that hard metal door handle.
Then my heart pounds as I open the
door and hear the teacher’s voice. I take my time but that funny, wobbly
feeling in my legs won’t let me move. So I just do it…..
Hi Erica, I like how you said I take my time but that funny, wobbly feeling in my legs won't let me move. Really cool.
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