Going to the Teachers' Printer for the First Time (by Ryan, age 7)

Do you have any feedback for Ryan on his first draft?

When I went to the printer, I stopped and was trying to be brave. I was thinking to myself, “No I’m NOT going down there”.

I saw children learning downstairs, and making lots of noise! I was shaking and staying where I was because I didn't want to go down there. 

Then Mrs Marshall gave me directions, and Hunter said, "Remember last year's class, Ryan? It's just near our old classroom".

Then I started to move again.