Do you have any feedback for Sean on his piece of writing?
On Saturday, I went to St Patrick's family camp.
We had a red and blue tent beside the cold stream. I had yummy hot chocolatey milo before I went to bed.
The toast and vegemite for breakfast was delicious. We made a boat with straws and tape. We made the boat float in the stream.
Fantastic writing Sean. We had a great time at the camp, didn't we Sean?
ReplyDeleteYou loved the Vegemite so much that you asked me to get some for home.
Mum x
Family trips are all about having fun and a filled tummy!
ReplyDeleteMarcella (mum Jilles)
Did you have a really good time? I saw you get the red Pat Buck! Did you buy a toy? From Heather, Olive and Lewis
ReplyDeleteSean I really liked how you said beside the cold stream.
ReplyDeleteBrenna