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From Mrs Marshall & Room 14

Thursday 20 September 2012

St Patrick's Family Camp (by Sean, age 7)

Do you have any feedback for Sean on his piece of writing?

On Saturday, I went to St Patrick's family camp. 

 We had a red and blue tent beside the cold stream. I had yummy hot chocolatey milo before I went to bed.  

 The toast and vegemite for breakfast was delicious. We made a boat with straws and tape. We made the boat float in the stream.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 September 2012 at 22:54

    Fantastic writing Sean. We had a great time at the camp, didn't we Sean?
    You loved the Vegemite so much that you asked me to get some for home.
    Mum x

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  2. Anonymous26 September 2012 at 02:52

    Family trips are all about having fun and a filled tummy!
    Marcella (mum Jilles)

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  3. Anonymous16 October 2012 at 11:27

    Did you have a really good time? I saw you get the red Pat Buck! Did you buy a toy? From Heather, Olive and Lewis

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  4. Anonymous1 November 2012 at 13:50

    Sean I really liked how you said beside the cold stream.
    Brenna

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